The ghostly souls of the abandoned ruin.
The shack sat in the rough green like a bird fallen short.
The wise old gate was battered by the harsh destructive weather. Abandoned and lonely, it opened itself up and looked at the ocean waiting for new visitors. Exhausted and groaning it slumped down letting death take its soul. The friendly concrete posts are the only thing holding up the fragile gate.
The sad lonely tree stood there abandoned and feeling lost. It stood still welcoming in the bright sun onto its spindly new spring shoots. The ill coloured moss was clinging to its chunky trunk.
The old lonely window sat tangled and unloved in the wall. Run down and abused by the storm, the vines choked its rusty frame.
The abandoned, mindless chair sat lifeless and shredded in the dark ghostly room. Old and dilapidated it was sad and alone. The sun peeked through the broken window, gazing at the gloomy worn chair.
It should be called: Under the cover.
ReplyDelete-Kayla
it should be called: The rundown rulers
ReplyDeleteLars
it should be called. ALL JOIN or THE HIDDEN HOME, ITS THERE BUT NOT THERE .ITS THERE BUT INVISIBLE
ReplyDeletejames
It sould be called, the old selttlement or the long lost home.
ReplyDelete-Breanna
The Ruins... or..... the shadows....or... Death under cover....
ReplyDelete-Amy....!!!!!
The old settler.../.
ReplyDelete-Amy
The lonly house
ReplyDeleteDan
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ReplyDeleteThe lost house
ReplyDeleteGraham
The lost soul
ReplyDeleteDan
The house of desprety or The house of dispear or The drunken house
ReplyDeleteGraham
The lost house
ReplyDeleteIt should be called: The ghostly souls of the abandoned ruin
ReplyDelete- Kayla and Taylor
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it should be called: the run down home
ReplyDelete-lilly
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ReplyDeleteI think it should be called abandoned or the abandoned house or abandonment
ReplyDeleteShawna
I think it should be called: the retired home or the the warndown pallace or the the retired widows home
ReplyDelete-lilly
My idea is it should be called 'A DERELICT HOUSE'😊
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