Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Personification

We have been looking at personification. We have described some pictures in pairs using personification and then have combined our sentences. Here is what we came up with. We don't have a title yet so put your ideas in the comments section. (WELL DONE TAYLOR AND KAYLA for winning the naming of the poem)


The ghostly souls of the abandoned ruin.

The shack sat in the rough green like a bird fallen short.

The wise old gate was battered by the harsh destructive weather. Abandoned and lonely, it opened itself up and looked at the ocean waiting for new visitors. Exhausted and groaning it slumped down letting death take its soul. The friendly concrete posts are the only thing holding up the fragile gate.

The sad lonely tree stood there abandoned and feeling lost. It stood still welcoming in the bright sun onto its spindly new spring shoots. The ill coloured moss was clinging to its chunky trunk.

The old lonely window sat tangled and unloved in the wall. Run down and abused by the storm, the vines choked its rusty frame.

The abandoned, mindless chair sat lifeless and shredded in the dark ghostly room. Old and dilapidated it was sad and alone. The sun peeked through the broken window, gazing at the gloomy worn chair. 


18 comments:

  1. It should be called: Under the cover.
    -Kayla

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  2. it should be called: The rundown rulers

    Lars

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  3. it should be called. ALL JOIN or THE HIDDEN HOME, ITS THERE BUT NOT THERE .ITS THERE BUT INVISIBLE

    james

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  4. It sould be called, the old selttlement or the long lost home.
    -Breanna

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  5. The Ruins... or..... the shadows....or... Death under cover....
    -Amy....!!!!!

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  7. The house of desprety or The house of dispear or The drunken house

    Graham

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  8. It should be called: The ghostly souls of the abandoned ruin

    - Kayla and Taylor

    :)

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  9. it should be called: the run down home

    -lilly

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  11. I think it should be called abandoned or the abandoned house or abandonment
    Shawna

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  12. I think it should be called: the retired home or the the warndown pallace or the the retired widows home

    -lilly

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  13. My idea is it should be called 'A DERELICT HOUSE'😊

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