I made tea

One of our writing focuses at the moment is ensuring we have the DETAIL required to create clear pictures in people minds. I made tea is a very simple sentence which gives us a very unclear picture (or no picture) in our mind. We need to add detail (elaborate) on it so the reader can put themselves into the situation. Click on the picture below to be linked through to a website which does exactly that to the sentence I made tea. Have a look as it is really effective. The students are practicing doing this and you will soon see examples on their blogs.