Tuesday 20 June 2017

Fast fashion

Many students have completed their article on the clothing industry. Many have uploaded them to their blogs  and more are coming. For many, if not most, this is the biggest piece of writing they have ever done. It has been a mammoth task and there are some great pieces of writing. Some really persuasive language and arguments have been used. They have included both rational and emotional arguments. They have grouped their ideas under sub headings, added detail, and spent lots of time checking if their writing is concise and makes sense to the reader. There has been lots of learning. Well done guys. You can be proud.

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